Wednesday, February 6, 2013

Imagist Poem


My Dog Fraiser

Speeds after his tennis ball

Like a bullet shot from a gun

1 comment:

  1. Have you talked to my previous students? Have they told you I'm a sucker for all things relating to animals? :) And thus I think this is awesome. It's cool that your poem works the opposite of the original. Whereas the original compares a human/man-made thing to something, you compare an animal to something man-made--a bullet. Thanks, too, for the photos!

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