Diary from the Past:
It’s
a peaceful spring day and I am enjoying some coffee while I have some down
time. Willy just took off for his long haul drive 700 miles for his job. The boys
are about to wake up and get ready for school then I’ll walk them to school. While
the boys are at school I think I will clean the house a little bit then relax
in the afternoon sun until it is time to walk back and pick the boys up from
school.
Diary from the Present:
Willy
came home tonight. It was so nice to see him after his long business trip. I have
started to notice that he is starting to act a little different. The boys have
picked up on it too and but he is good at heart. Why can’t they see that in him
like I can? They no longer show him the respect that I think they should be
giving him after everything that we have done for them over the years.
Great job! really sounds like somthing she would write.
ReplyDeleteI think you were on the right track for sure! but you might have been able to put a little more detail into the past diary, and we really would have been sucked in :) Have a wonderful day!
ReplyDeleteGood Job! This Sounds like it came straight from her. It hooked me in.
ReplyDeleteYour entry is minimal, but it is at least staying true to the plot and specifics offered in the play.
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